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The woman on the train
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:26:19 am


I saw her get on at 14th Street. There were a few empty seats, but she sat down on the floor without looking around. This odd behavior immediately drew more of my attention, and I began to notice the blemishes on her skin and the odd grayish color of her hands. I wondered if she was a heroine addict.

She frantically searched through her purse, placing various items on the floor without regard for hygiene. The anguish on her face was ambiguous, something between dread and annoyance. I wondered if she was desperately trying to find her drugs. Her face changed immediately when she found what she was looking for. It was a bottle of perfume. She splashed copious amounts on her neck, followed by copious amounts on her crotch. That's when I concluded that she was probably a prostitute.

After the foundation was applied, her facial blemishes became invisible, but there were still abnormal blemishes on her legs which she did not seem to care about. She spent the next ten minutes applying makeup and brushing her hair. She finished just in time to get off the train at 36th Street. A subtle scent of homelessness wafted in the air as she walked passed me. I wondered if her next client would notice or care.
1) thekfactor,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:30:48 am

Wow. The worst I've seen on the DC Metro is pools of vomit on Friday night.
2) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:33:04 am

re: comment#1
Wow. The worst I've seen on the DC Metro is pools of vomit on Friday night.
I see plenty of urination on the train. I actually see that more often than vomiting.
3) peredovoi_otryad,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:39:23 am

The worst I have seen ais blood on train tracks, and large plastic sheets covering what I presume are body parts.
4) thekfactor,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:40:16 am

The Metro here is very clean. You cannot eat or drink on it so there are almost no rats. The cars have carpeting instead of the linoleum/whatever thing so the ride is very quiet. It was designed in the 70s when the idea was that the city is "dirty" and the transit should be segregated from it aesthetically. It has become less like that recently though, as ridership is now around a 800k per day (in a metro area of 5 million), so the new cars have fewer seats and some have the rubber floors instead of carpeting to save money.
5) evilserif,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:44:20 am

Interesting. I wonder what her life is like.
6) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:48:32 am

re: comment#3
The worst I have seen ais blood on train tracks, and large plastic sheets covering what I presume are body parts.
I have seen blood in the train but not on the tracks.
7) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:48:38 am

agrees with: comment#5
Interesting. I wonder what her life is like.
8) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:49:18 am

re: comment#4
The Metro here is very clean. You cannot eat or drink on it so there are almost no rats. The cars have carpeting instead of the linoleum/whatever thing so the ride is very quiet. It was designed in the 70s when the idea was that the city is "dirty" and the transit should be segregated from it aesthetically. It has become less like that recently though, as ridership is now around a 800k per day (in a metro area of 5 million), so the new cars have fewer seats and some have the rubber floors instead of carpeting to save money.
The trains in NYC are still somewhat dirty, but they are far cleaner than they were 20 years ago.
9) sweeneyjohn,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:43:15 am

I never knew homelessness had a discernible scent.
10) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:07:34 pm

re: comment#9
I never knew homelessness had a discernible scent.
There are three basic types of homelessness odors. I can't describe them. I assume it arises from lack of shower/bath combined with malnutrition.
11) udosero,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:16:18 pm

re: comment#9
what did she look like?
A slightly more androgynous version of this with skin blemishes:
12) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 4:18:43 pm

I have never seen one hauling oranges.
13) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:50:03 pm

re: comment#12
why did you go into your other account to reply to me?
Someone who is not a current member of this site may see this post and wonder why I would know what udosero saw on the train.
14) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:00:14 pm

re: comment#13
so why not post the whole thing as erdos0?
I have a reason that will become evident eventually.
15) erdos0,
Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:02:44 pm

re: comment#14
i thought it might have been to make the site appear to have more users than it does.
No. If that was the objective, I would use a different profile photo.
16) sweeneyjohn,
Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:02:31 pm

re: comment#11
A slightly more androgynous version of this with skin blemishes:
Looks like an elegant, attractive, non-foot-face version of Sarah Jessica Parker.
17) sweeneyjohn,
Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:04:43 pm

re: comment#13
so why not post the whole thing as erdos0?
This is his artistic/literary account.
18) erdos0,
Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:22:00 pm

agrees with: comment#16
Looks like an elegant, attractive, non-foot-face version of Sarah Jessica Parker.
19) erdos0,
Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:22:12 pm

agrees with: comment#17
This is his artistic/literary account.